The story moves along well, and character development is actually pretty good for as light as it is. I did find it a bit anti-climatic though.

I was really looking forward to this book and I was very disappointed! The story was not well thought out, it read like a 10 year old's short story assignment that was hastily put together the night before it was due. The time travel aspect is choppy and confusing. The characters are not likeable so it was hard to care about them.